Saturday, September 1, 2007

Simplicity William Zinsser

This Particular chapter helped show me the errors in my writing. I often lose intrest in my own writings for many

reasons. One being that I use words incorrectly, and also lose my train of thought which will mean the reader is lost.

Thinking clearly for me takes time, especially when its been a long day or early in the morning. I found knowing this

helped me to realise why my works never came out so well maby when i start a new work of art i will keep them in

mind.

Thursday, August 30, 2007

Thoughts and mind of Rachel Bridges

welcome to my thoughts and mind, hope you enjoy youre stay. This blog is for Hudson Valley Community College class English Composition 1.